Tell-Tell's 5 days to better poetry - DAY 5

 Oh, my! I should have written this a few days ago, but I have been really busy, so here we go (finally)!

DAY 5 ~~~ PUT IT ALL TOGETHER

We've learned a lot so far: we played around with line breaks, stanza breaks and images. Now, we'll work on that, apparently.

Activity:

You don't like your hair
You say it's
Like wires, like natives'
And it comes out all white thus you die it
Pony tails in dad's hair
But you'd never let us play with yours
No hairstyles

I guess that's why you want me to keep my hair long
Because you can't do anything with yours

The wires tie my hair in tight ponytails

OK -- this is all I could do. I struggled with some of the instructions, but I (sort of) made it😃

Conclusion

    We are finally done with this challenge! I hope you enjoyed reading these results as much as I enjoyed writing them, and that you now sign up for 5 days to better poetry if you haven't already! I will now go on reading and writing poetry, paying close attention to my line and stanza breaks and my images. After all, poetry is all about playing around with words and what you show and feel with them, as I've just learned. 

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